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Literature Text
You know
These are dust we
Dust overseas graves
Away
in the galaxy
You know
These are dust we
You forget
at the bottom of your pocket
The one in my hole
You know what are we dust
Overseas dust falls
Away
in the galaxy
Your dream inted
You know what are we dust
Committed skies
away in the galaxy
the brash
These are dust we
Dust overseas graves
Away
in the galaxy
You know
These are dust we
You forget
at the bottom of your pocket
The one in my hole
You know what are we dust
Overseas dust falls
Away
in the galaxy
Your dream inted
You know what are we dust
Committed skies
away in the galaxy
the brash
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Your distinct phrasing here really brings out the individuality of the poem and makes it more memorable but it feels clumsy at times, overall this is very well-written. Good job. 